Tuesday 20 December 2016

First draft and feeback

strengths

  • effective cuts to the beat in early shots
  • 00.23, 00.26, 02.06, 02.28 are beautiful shots
weaknesses/need to be changed
  • add our names etc to the title card
  • 00.32-doorstep shot- could be straightened so the door step is level - would provide more symmetry and balance
  • do the jump cuts at 00.45-00.48 work? we could avoid these and just use a dip to black at the end to indicate the change in time to the Pottergate underpass shot
  • 01.33 is very bright compared to 01.35- can you adjust brightness levels?01.47 and 01.48 have the same problem
  • we need a prop/object in the girl sections to keep audience interest
  • we need to put the cork board in
  • we could cut the song at 03.28 ish, which would mean 90 seconds lss footage needed and would be tighter 

How does the video “Bachelorette” by Bjork use a structure of anticipation and closure? (updated)

This video can be understood using a structuralist perspective, using a Todorovian narrative analysis we can see that there is a three act structure. The first act is when she finds the book and gets the publishing deal, she seems to seek and enjoy the fame, so this is the equilibrium. Act two consists of her putting on a play of her story to fame, within the play when the publisher looks at her book and red lighting appears, inciting a warning to the disequilibrium, then we see the play repeat itself- a play within a play. The new equilibrium comes into action quite late, the actors and audience turn into trees right at the end, this brings us back to the begin of when she starts in a forest, and Bjork’s happy again J, her struggle has been resolved. This conventional three act structure drives the audience’s anticipation and our desire to watch the end, because mainstream audiences universally always seek ideological closure and a happy resolution. The returning back to a forest setting makes it have a circular narrative, this gives the audience closure because she is happy again like in the beginning.
Wider intertextual narratives can also help us understand the video. The video builds upon films to do with American Hollywood and exploitation (King Kong, Fight club etc.); films where books are pivotal in the story line (Harry Potter, The Da Vinci Code etc.); films involving broken/destructive relationships (The Shining, Gone Girl etc.); films where unknown ordinary people get discovered as a star in Hollwood (Slumdog Millionaire, The Hollywood Complex et.). Enabling the audience to interpret and respond to the Todorovian narrative and the journey Bjork goes on, because they can reference for example the over extravagant American Hollywood with e.g King Kong, they could prefigure her downfall.
Prefiguring is one of Barther’s (another structuralist) concepts of narrative devices, it enables the audience to foreshadow/anticipate the closure they expect, or give them surprising/unexpected closure and keep them gripped to find out this out. Another method used is symbolic devices, the book is one of the most obvious of these. As her story develops and she gains more fame, the book increases in size, this could symbolise her ego or alternatively her fame. Therefore this intertwines with the narrative strand of American Hollywood discovering unknown talent, when she’s unknown her ego is small, when she has fame her ego is bigger. Moreover this book is also an enigma code that the audience want to see an answer to, because of the fast paced editing accompanied by the ludicrousness of its size, connoting distress and her becoming overwhelmed, the audience start to anticipate her downfall and want to see closure to this. Moreover camera shots transition from many point of view shots to wider handheld shots, this also helps the idea of Hollwood changing her suggesting she’s becoming consumed by it. Trains/transport and black and white filters are used to incite ellipsis and a sense of movement, these symbolic devices drive the story forward and construct narrative movement. Once the black and white and the trains/cars are no longer seen it is suggesting that we are now in real time, whereas previously she was telling us a flashback, this could be when anticipation is at its climax because the audience feel that they will soon get closure/an ending and have all these enigma and proairetic codes they want answers to.
The clear 4/4 beat drives the music, and the regularity of the beat creates a cadence that builds our expectation of closure, the regularity of the beat creates a cadence that promotes audiences anticipation. By synchronising many of the cuts to the beat of the song, the music video reinforces the pivotal and central nature of the musical cadence, further building anticipation. At the same time, the song structure and lyrics/rhyme play with the audience’s expectation: the song follows a structure of verse-verse-chorus-verse-verse-chorus-verse. The absence of a middle eighth surprises the audience, because audiences anticipate a particular structure, the final singular verse which refutes the other expected structure which would usually have two verses and the removal of the middle eighth adds surprise and a lack of closure. This structure therefore is a proairetic code that the audience don’t get to see closure to, propagating Bjork’s motif of going against the norm/mainstream and being arty/different. This is perpetuated by the absence of repetition of many choruses, which pop songs have to get a lot of anticipation and therefore a lot of catchy parts the audience can sing along to, which is one reason why they are popular because they are easy to remember. However the two choruses we do hear contain ostinato and clear repetition (Leave me now, return tonight) so are still built upon anticipation and closure which drives the song forward. The lyrics use an alternative rhyme scheme which forms anticipation because the audience expect a rhyme at a certain place, therefore this closure of the rhyme is anticipated and providing a periodic sense of return. But the use of half rhymes and internal rhymes oddly placed contradict the sense of anticipation because there’s no clear and conventional pattern used with them. The repeated refrains and choruses make up for this because these then reinforce the anticipation and closure again.

The music video also utilizes the use of different narrative units to build anticipation and closure, these are revisited through the text, building a complex structure. The narrative builds a cumulative sense fame becoming too much for her leading to her downfall, this is implied throughout the video (The book and its increasing size; big extravagant city; her increase in popularity and the presence of people surrounding her; the play within a play). The variety of narrative threads (nature; relationships; theatre; Hollywood; the book) are woven throughout the text and intertwine with each other. These are small narrative units that change and develop across the video, in many ways the narrative units are symbolic of the story and its outcome, the only unit which spans across the whole video is the concept of nature and presence of trees. This connotes a struggle of natural balances therefore making the audience foreshadow her downfall, because all the other narrative units are building up to her downfall and indicating her becoming overwhelmed, for example her love interest is all good in the beginning but the they beak up later on. Therefore these narrative units are pushing the story forward and acting as a proairetic code that the audience want to see closure to. Also this is critiquing the celebrity/fame/ the labyrinth and confusion of the modern music industry and the losing of one's sense of self because not only is the video implying that fame etc leads to her downfall. All these narrative units come to an abrupt end at some point in the video, this could be suggesting Bjorks mid life crisis, as it is implying that all the good things in her life have ended therefore for she lacks a sense of purpose and meaning. This could also imply the ’15 mintes of fame’ reality of Hollwood and celebrity life.



Annotated lyrics and how they demonstrate cadence

‘Bachelorette’ by Bjork

(Verse)
I'm a fountain of blood
In the shape of a girl
You're the bird on the brim
Hypnotized by the Whirl

(Verse)
Drink me, make me feel real
Wet your beak in the stream life                                             internal rhyme
Game we're playing is                                                            Alternative rhyme
Love is a two way dream                                                        Assonance/half rhymes

(Chorus)
Leave me now, return tonight
Tide will show you the way
If you forget my name
You will go astray
Like a killer whale
Trapped in a bay

(Verse)
I'm a path of cinders
Burning under your feet
You're the one who walks me
I'm your one way street

(Verse)
I'm a whisper in water
Secret for you to hear
You are the one who grows distant
When I beckon you near

(Chorus)
Leave me now, return tonight
The tide will show you the way
If you forget my name
You will go astray
Like a killer whale
Trapped in a bay

(Verse)
I'm a tree that grows hearts
One for each that you take
You're the intruder hand
I'm the branch that you break
Hum-yeah!

Different Narrative strands visually demonstrated