- effective cuts to the beat in early shots
- 00.23, 00.26, 02.06, 02.28 are beautiful shots
weaknesses/need to be changed
- add our names etc to the title card
- 00.32-doorstep shot- could be straightened so the door step is level - would provide more symmetry and balance
- do the jump cuts at 00.45-00.48 work? we could avoid these and just use a dip to black at the end to indicate the change in time to the Pottergate underpass shot
- 01.33 is very bright compared to 01.35- can you adjust brightness levels?01.47 and 01.48 have the same problem
- we need a prop/object in the girl sections to keep audience interest
- we need to put the cork board in
- we could cut the song at 03.28 ish, which would mean 90 seconds lss footage needed and would be tighter
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